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Fear Not, Death

Fear not death when it comes for you... Death is not a monster, not even a master, but a servant-- having no more choice in the taking of you than you have in the going.... And if you are defiant, telling lonely Death, "By my hand, not yours, I will set my own fate!" Death will smirk, laugh, and say without rancor: "Take my job, please! It has never given me a moment's pleasure. To be forever feared, hated, despised-- when all I have ever done was to open a door.... But know, proud human, (the only animal who disputes my work), when YOU turn the knob, yes, to eternity's door... it may not lead you to the same place as when I open it." I knew his meaning, responded contritely: "Fear not, Death-- I will not resist your silent coming. I know Who issues your deadly orders. Forgive us humans for our denial: we keep forgetting we exist always, and this life is but a scratch in time."

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Date: 11/14/2021 4:21:00 PM
You're so talented! Amazing writing! Wow, all of your poems incredible!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 11/16/2021 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Diane-- some of them were very hard won...
Date: 7/29/2021 8:46:00 PM
Ye, to eternity door... A beautiful write. Congratulations on your win!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/30/2021 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, my friend
Date: 9/28/2020 8:17:00 AM
Would love to know more about your experience. Have you written s poem on it? It would have been wonderful and of course life changing.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/29/2020 10:01:00 AM
See the poem ,'The Leap'
Date: 9/28/2020 4:44:00 AM
This reminds me of a verse of Bhagvad Gita which states death is mere change of clothes for the soul. If you get time do read Gita chapter two in net. Was reading your poems. I like your style of writing. Rama
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/28/2020 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Rama--all the Holy Books proclaim the soul, and I was fortunate enough to experience its irrefutable reality.
Date: 6/17/2020 2:31:00 AM
Oh I am so glad I got to read this one! You resonate my perceptions on death with a sparkling muse. In the end, if we live to the fullest, we know how to embrace death like an old friend waiting for us. I'd written a verse on my conversation with death. Congratulations on your win :) Blessings
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/17/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Aditi--yes, I learned 50 years ago-- the hard way, as I tend to--that death is a door, not a wall--the tricky part is what world that door leads a particular soul to...
Date: 6/16/2020 12:45:00 PM
'L.J., Congratulations on your excellent and very thoughtful poem. Well-deserved win! David'
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/16/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thank you David, much appreciated!
Date: 6/16/2020 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your poem. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day................
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/16/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I'm glad you liked it
Date: 6/16/2020 6:37:00 AM
A superb write LJ. Congrats on top win. Mohan
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/16/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Mohan
Date: 6/15/2020 9:38:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/16/2020 2:44:00 PM
Gracias, mi amiga, y vaya con Dios tambien!
Date: 6/15/2020 7:17:00 PM
This is stunning L.J.! I am so happy she gave you First Place for it.Congratulations my friend. It deserves the honor! xxoo
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/16/2020 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Connie-- hope you and yours are all well--go with God...
Date: 4/4/2020 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations LJ. Profound poem.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/5/2020 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Sam--God bless!
Date: 4/4/2020 4:41:00 PM
Wonderful poetry at its finest my friend! Congrats on your #1 win!;)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/5/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Brenda--may you and yours go with God in these fraught times.
Date: 4/4/2020 2:48:00 PM
This is brilliant, L. J.--view from other side. Congrats on your well deserved first place win.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 6/16/2020 2:43:00 PM
Sorry I missed thanking you before, Vijay
Date: 2/22/2020 6:56:00 PM
YES, you think just like me, and guess what? I HAD seen this one before. This is what I had said back in 2015: outstanding message in this poem. I think the judge made some wise choices. I am already loving the first and second place winners. congrats.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/23/2020 9:39:00 AM
Sorry Andrea--my memory!
Date: 1/8/2020 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win!;)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/8/2020 12:39:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda
Date: 12/1/2019 11:17:00 PM
So well said my friend (Fav).
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/2/2019 9:11:00 AM
Thank you-- I wrote it as a counterpoint to Dylan Thomas's advice to 'rage, rage, against the dying light'. I learned-- the hard way-- almost 50 years ago that death is a door, not a wall.
Date: 4/12/2018 10:00:00 PM
Your win . introduced me to you. Look forward to reading other poems. Congrats!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/12/2018 10:12:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara, your interest is very much appreciated.
Date: 4/10/2018 2:37:00 AM
Beautifully penned and an interesting take on the theme. Congratulations on your win. Kai
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/10/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Kai-- I appreciate the kind words.
Date: 4/9/2018 12:02:00 PM
Wow, L.J. Spectacular - this reading was like a breathtaking play before my eyes!! A definite FAVE for me. Thank you.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/10/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Line-- I tried to address our contemporary secular attitude as something feared so much we try to put it out of mind.
Date: 4/7/2018 12:20:00 PM
Excellent write, L.J. , congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/7/2018 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate it very much
Date: 4/16/2017 12:52:00 AM
Congrats, thanks for entering my contest.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/19/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Richard-- I am honored.
Date: 6/28/2015 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/25/2015 11:17:00 PM
Len, this is a wonderful win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:41:00 PM
Len, congratulations on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/25/2015 9:58:00 PM
You would have had a winner with only the last five lines, Len, but a great write all in all. Congratulations, and I hope that you are a lot lower down the reaper's list than you are in this competition. Regards, Viv
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