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Fear Is Fake

An impulse, like hunger or thirst, that marks, Need for defense from a danger that sparks; Nervousness if not attended to and healed, Turns phobia and soon great power wield...! Aren't snakes, spiders, and cockroaches creatures? Don't tigers and lions have tender features? Aren't fire and air midst other facets, Function as Mother Nature's great assets...? Why should I fear the dead and their spirits? Aren't good deeds to the alive, my merits? Can daggers or guns or cannons kill me, When the endless life, in my soul, flows free...? Psychologic senses, yet, are aroused. Cognitive logic, like drunk bees, drowsed. Behavioral emptiness created, Emotions, for the sake of fear, weighted...! Fear is like a rope that seems like a snake, That, for a split second, my self does shake; This, like a speck on a stream, flows away, When confidence and courage come to stay...! 16 January 2023 Fear Is Liar Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 2/20/2023 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on a well thought, well written winning poem. Great work!
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Date: 1/24/2023 7:34:00 AM
Brilliant descriptions on fear my dear friend Christuraj, My strong affirmation on every line expressed well by your creative words. So many striking lines for me especially the first stanza, then the endless life in the soul that flows free which encourages us a lot to fight fear and also the 2 last stanzas. Impressive write as a whole . Congratulations on your win and this stellar write my dear friend. Thanks for sharing. Blessings always! Hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/24/2023 9:08:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very generous encouragement. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/23/2023 6:39:00 PM
"Fear is like a rope that seems like a snake, That, for a split second, my self does shake; This, like a speck on a stream, flows away, When confidence and courage come to stay...!" Love the whole poem, especially the concluding stanza . Congratulations Chris on your win !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/24/2023 4:42:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/23/2023 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Fear Is Fake" is so true. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/24/2023 4:42:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/23/2023 9:30:00 AM
Utterly amazing! You have my deepest gratitude for winning in my contest, ALEX.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/24/2023 4:42:00 AM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/17/2023 9:34:00 AM
Nicely and Neatly composed. Every aspect regarding Fear is well explained. Sure to win. Happy New Year.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/23/2023 6:57:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/17/2023 4:55:00 AM
Fear is a terrible burden. Good luck, Chris.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/23/2023 6:57:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/16/2023 9:06:00 AM
Well said, Christuraj. Fear does exist because of valid reasons, but in certain instances it is all in the mind. ~ Regards // paul
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/16/2023 9:27:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/16/2023 3:35:00 AM
Creative lines written for the contest. Way to go. Fear is an emotion, but God has offered courage and hope to take its place. Sara
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/16/2023 9:27:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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