Fb Shy Boys

since dt day when i hv given u a compliment....
u hv promised me dt u wl gv ur tym whenever i need...
i hv closed my eyes n opened my heart to ds sentiment....
dese fb shy boys wl nly luk at u whn they r in greed....

all d words that i have said to you...
dsnt was a fake n i promise determined.....
bt u hv swallow it ,without even tastin n chew..
dese fb shy boys wl nly luk at u whn they r in greed....

i hv msgd u so much bt i didnt gt the replies...
i have stopped myself so much so that u didn't find me in need..
bt u always came up with stupid lies...
these fb shy boys will only look at u when they r in greed....

i stepd forward n cal u at midnights...
i always started conversation so dt u didn't feel misdeed...
bt whn d day came to meet each other n i dnt feel dt vibes....
these fb shy boys wl only look at u when they r in greed....

i thought may be dt wsnt a gud tym to meet and consider...
so i came up wid a plan to again set a day to proceed....
bt again u become insecure n made me feel stranger...
dese fb shy boys wl nly luk at u whn dey r in greed....
 
love pari 

if u liked d poem or evn if u hate it..plz gv me ur feedback through ur cmnts..i wl apreciate it..

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Date: 6/6/2013 11:03:00 PM
Micro piece all abbreviated still good form :) welcome to the soul!!! - Edward
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 6/7/2013 12:12:00 AM
thanx alot edward..u cn go thru my odr poems too..keep postin :) :)
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