Favors Of Nature

I get close to a good tree
I received good shade for free. 

I dream to see a rainbow scene
In the midst of the outpouring rain. 

It's hard to see the sun in busy fair
But it's clear when the sunset is near. 

The river is so silent and clear
It disturbed when I paddle dear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Hello Hugo, yes the water would be dkisturbed with the paddle making ripples as the boat goes along. Love you here. /Darlene/
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September 9, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Hello Hugo, Yes Hugo { find tranquility with the water.[ the sound of water is calming to me. it always has been that way for me. Much love here. /Darlene/
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 6:25 PM
It's a metaphorically incline here, Darlene. The deepest sea has deeper meaning. Nature tells us that when we are near to them we find tranquility and produce wild imagination to think of. But when human intervene it with negligence, nature gives us headache. But when we jive nature at its best, happiness is a rewarding. Much love here./Hugo.
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