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(ORIGINAL TITLE WAS STUNNING SPRING) Dainty daffodils, pastel hyacinths colourful crocus, and vibrant tulips dance in warm sunshine Watch little lambs gambol and play in lush meadows of vibrant green New leaves dress naked trees, blossom blooms I just adore spring Checked with PS syllable Counter Spring Diminshed Hexaverse Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger Submitted to Favorite Poem Contest Sponsored by Loo Lu 3/31/19

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2019 11:01:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Jan! Congratulations!

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2019 7:18:00 AM

Lovely write Jan...Congrats on your win..

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/2/2019 10:09:00 PM

"new leaves dress naked trees" This is a beautiful spring poem, Jan. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2019 7:40:00 PM

I remember this one , Jan, and I adore your poem! Congrats for the fine win.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/29/2019 7:54:00 AM

I just adore this poem :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/22/2019 9:20:00 PM

Lovely, Jan. It comes alive. Congratulations!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2019 10:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in Laura's contest. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2019 10:01:00 PM

You make this challenging form shine Jan. Congratulations on your second placement! xxoo

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/17/2019 8:08:00 PM

G'day Jan … nicely presented Jan. Spring is like a new beginning and I can't recall a poem about spring offering doom and gloom - Lindsay

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/14/2019 10:51:00 PM

a lovely read on spring

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/5/2019 12:26:00 PM

A lovely spring piece Jan, penned so well with insightful thoughts. Hope hubby is doing well, prayerfully yours,Gordon

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/4/2019 10:33:00 PM

I adore your diminished hexaverse - a lovely read befitting its Spring topic. So pretty, Jan. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 4/3/2019 12:06:00 PM

Great from one of the master Soup Poetess a "FAV" for me..Grand poem Write on James

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/31/2019 2:29:00 PM

You should dance naked with the trees and let the neighbours (or your husband) supply the leaf to celebrate spring! Aloha! Rico

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2019 9:14:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/31/2019 8:15:00 AM

A beautiful one Jan with lovely imagery!

Ann Gilmour

Date: 3/31/2019 7:00:00 AM

Ohhhhh, such beautiful images from your glorious DH Jan, good luck in the contest and thanks for this awesome spring image. Kindest thoughts Ann xx missing you dear Jan xxxxxx