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Fatty Bum Bum

How did I end up in this state? I'm always fighting with my weight, I'd like to put it down to fate, but that ain't honest! I know for sure what I do wrong, I've known the truth all along, but I always sing a different song, and that ain't honest! I've tried to blame my family, for passing the fat gene down to me, and making me a big fat'B', but that ain't honest. So now I'm gonna face the fact, I have to make me a slimming pact, and with exercise I must react. Now, that is honest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2012 2:27:00 PM
Tom I like this, sure it's not true though, if for the contest good luck..David
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Tom Higgins
Date: 5/7/2012 2:31:00 PM
David, thank you for reading it, I don't seem to be able to enter the competition, it tells me it is full up! This poem was poem of the day recently on poemhunter.com, but I think I have written better ones.

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