Fatima

Fatima

F illed with teases and fun,
A rtistic in all she does.
T hinks always of what's to come,
I llustrating unique wisdom.
M arks all, when the day is done,
A n independent young woman.



Dedicated to my lovely sister Fatima...Maryam*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 3, 2011 at 2:41 PM
My sisters name is Miriam ;) Light & Love!
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March 14, 2009 at 3:36 PM
Nice use of this challenging format for an uplifting view. I'm sure your sister was delighted with this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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March 14, 2009 at 1:58 PM
This is a beautiful Acrostic and lovely dedication to your sister! It is wonderful to see the love and admiration you have for her. Great job, Maryam! Love, Robin
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March 14, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Awww that's a a great poem. Sometimes it's hard for me to love my sister, but in the end, it's all good. Great work ~Jen~
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