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Fatima

Bent on reprisal sword in hand
Gonzalo and friends paddle ahead
To Alcácer Do Sal where Christians
By Moors are held
Concealed by dusk 
Disembarking their boat
Toward the city bravely walk
Hiding from view they observe
Moorish girls and men sport around 
Dancing on the grass for Bairam fest
Dazzling among companions
Sweet loveliness beyond compare
Charming in lightness and glamour
Captured by her smile Gonzalo
Maddened with love 
Rushing into the crowd snatches her, loses her
Snatches her again from the belligerent crowd
Flattered by his valorous effort 
Falls in his arms tight the girl enamored
Burning with love they run
Having escaped she converts 
Joining body and soul in married joy
Not meant to last
Much too much happiness
For one heart to hold
Princess bids farewell to the world.
A monk now Gonzalo
Her image in heart of his heart
Reflected in the beauty all around
Sweetness of her fragrance in the flowers
Her gaiety in all playful seek and hide
And in the bell ringing prayer
Her name Fatima
Bridge between warring sides.
Fatima by Gonzalo named is where Mary 
Preceded by The Angel of Peace,
Chose to appear to three children
Lucia, Francisco and Jacinta
With signs and wonders
And the sun dancing in the sky 
Witnessed by thousands
Warning of the abode of the damned
Where souls that nobody prays for
Or sacrifice for end
With a promise of peace and a request
To pray the rosary, convert, make amends
Consecrate Russia and all wars will end
Or nations will vanish from the earth.
When you hear peace sweet deceit
It’s world war three drum beat
Bent by suffering to its knees
A remnant will beg God for peace
The peace that through Mary God will give.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/22/2020 5:10:00 PM
so interesting. Is this a portrayal of two different religious Fatimas? I found two different ones when I tried to work on my poem for this contest. Lovely descriptions of Fatima's beauty,
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Date: 11/2/2020 9:08:00 AM
A retelling of the story of the town and the legend of Fatima. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 11/2/2020 11:20:00 AM
For historical details on the origin of the town check: Leaves From The Portuguese Olive-No III: The Cancioneros. The Fatima miracles are well recorded. Jacinta and Francisco Marto have been canonized and Jacinta's face found incorrupt.
Date: 11/1/2020 2:34:00 AM
Lovely verse and well written , Frances, good luck in the contest.
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 11/1/2020 1:05:00 PM
Hot sun wrapped thank you eggs hatching success wishes for your poetry
Date: 10/26/2020 4:17:00 PM
You did this very well Frances...
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 10/27/2020 8:07:00 AM
Your compliment is a sun broom wiping clouds out of my mind. Thank you for smiles

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