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Father's Leave Us

Why do fathers leave us? Is it the same reason that lovers hurt us? Lead us to believe that none are different. No pain deeper than the thought of rejection, He turns his back with no goodbye to an expecting mother, No comfort like the promises he gave her to pull up her skirt only to let down her expectations. Joy fulfilled, yet the heart of that beautiful woman, Lying vulnerable with promises from a man about to turn his back and place her in his past. When fathers leave us is the pain equal to when lovers hurt us. Hurt us like we were never born of women and our hearts do not bleed blood red like they're own. Do they not see the desperation on our face when they walk out? Can they not feel our souls distancing with our bodies trying to hold on to what the naked eye fails to see, a future. If they didn't leave us would we know what pain is? Our self-thought superheroes built in our minds to protect and shield us Love and hold us Disappearing into the distant history leaving no story, but broken hearts, Flooding tears, Repeated questions. No answers.

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Date: 11/10/2013 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Faceless --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA
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Date: 11/4/2013 3:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome... I have found a family here now. I will be dropping by for reads and for inspiration because where one can put an eye can put a mind. Faceless
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:47:00 PM
Faceless, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:24:00 AM
Faceless Word, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 10/18/2013 4:37:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, F.W. ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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