Father's Day

You put a smile on my face
Every time you crack a joke, everyone is amaze
When you get a coin in my ears
And when you blow up all my fears

When I strum the guitar that you gave to me when I was ten
We play together the musical notes of life
I’m glad that I belong with you, you from heaven
Together we play the melody from the star light

You taught me to ride a quadruple bike
Even if the balance was not balance to three until it became twice
I know that you are there holding my shirt, standing
Never let me fall, until I learn my lesson of moving

We made our first kite together
 It was blue; white is the tail, sticks holding the long thread
It looks like your dream for me and our hands holding it tighter
FLY HIGH! And it turns to cool certificates in the space near my bed

You’re a love adviser next to her and her
Giving some points, make my first fall in love with me
But for now she’s my EX, and you still giving another
Trying to bring up my heart, and learn to love my forever

Your foot steps are always at the back of my feet
When I’m down, you lifted me up as you show your teeth
You tap my spine and will say the magic word
“Look at me now” say cheese at your side is our Lord

And now it’s time to give you a hug
I know that you do not have a social net and hates TAG
Personally, I will say the title of this with happy ad
Thank you for everything, LOVE, LIGHT and LIFE
You’re the best, I love you dad…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/9/2014 3:33:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your father, Jhucel - no wonder it is on the winners' list! Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/11/2014 10:36:00 PM
Jhucel, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 6/10/2014 1:45:00 PM
:) COngratulations kabayan.. :) sadyang pagkaganda ganda ng iyong gawa... napakatalinghada.. at akmang akma sa iyong ama.. tatay,, itay.. :) lovely endearing write.. ;D
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2014 11:10:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, Jhucel
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2014 8:16:00 PM
While you still have him, ask all of the questions you will have when he is gone. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2014 9:36:00 AM
Oh, I love it. What a sweet poem. So adorable :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/8/2014 5:02:00 AM
I like the way you paid tribute to your dad, Jhyucel
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter