Fathers Day

Father, I'd hear your whispered voice, "Let's go fishing?"
Away, we'd go, always on sunny pleasant days.
Together, you and I, hiked down through
Heavy tall green sedge and rapid flapping of wings.
Early morning towards the pl-ashy
Riverbank, on a cloud of silence. There was no
Such thing as time, when waiting for fish to take the bait.

Dad, the sun rose and went down
As you gave us strength. You were and are the
Yoke of love that always keeps us together.

5/12/2021

Poetry Contest: A TRIBUTE TO FATHERS 
Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 7:10 PM
A beautifully written tribute to your father, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Eve Congrats on your win! Lovely memories of Dad!! Wonderful!
Logan Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 5:11 AM
Well done for a winning write in Milt's Father's Day contest, Eve.
Agustin Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this wondrous experience with your Dad. Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" It should be on a card. Have a blessed day with your win..............
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Eve, from the first line to the finish line, your poem was very special. Congratulations on your placement in my contest.
Proxenos Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:54 AM
I wish I had seen this contest, my father is now my guardian angel but before he left us he was my hero. A wonderful tribute to you father. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 5:02 AM
Dad kept you busy and gave you strength. A nice tribute!
Alex Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 10:44 PM
Beautiful!
Brul Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 4:11 PM
A great story in a fine acrostic form! This is a heartwarming gift to all fathers!
Rose  Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Beautifully penned dear Eve, thank you for sharing your talented pen. Hope your keeping well, : )
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Awesome write Eve, reminiscing in sweet memories. Much love emanates from your poem.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:56 AM
A great tribute to a father.
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