Father's Day

Fathers Day

They came in the grey
of that fractured dawn.
Those sombre men
in mourning suits.

Platitudinous and
ruthlessly efficient
they took him away
in an anonymous bag

Our childhood Everest,
Methuselah, 
shrunken now
to common size.

Incomprehension muttered
behind our eyes,
minds locked, quarantined
from the mundane.

A lesser day dawned
empty and reduced
haunted by sullen night,
gravid with realisation.

Birds sang, milk rattled
children played.
Fatherless, we watched
him leave us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
January 20, 2026 at 7:25 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Thompson Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Very poignant. Well done. RT
Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 8:03 AM
A lesser day it is when someone dear to you dies..a powerful write, archie..well done, friend.
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