Fatherly Talk

You all,her too
She thought i lost my diction
She made me mild,and i turned a new leaf
A new one;not my cheek
But to Wilde;
So I guess its true what he says,
"a woman's face its a work of fiction"
To my,to my higherbeing i surrender my past
It has been done,been done to death since the start of time
Jehovah sells it best than anyone,so please consider this my new testament
and i still welcome you to test a man.
Eve,Eve was made to be both my curse and blessing
Eve was only supposed to have my ribs
Eve was my ambition before she was my addiction-my foolish ways;
I guess i thought i went one better when i let her into my palace,
but Eve knew better and she left it in ruins and me shelterless.
And then and there I knew I had to call to the Master Palace;
Only with gracious treats did the Master please my palate,
'fore he handed me pure white gold crusted keys to his cottage out in the back gardens(a small as it is,which i wholly appreciate)
A cottage whose security could match that of a chastity belt;

You see I still worry about Eve,I don't feel whole
I love my ribs to bit,technically I'm bound to love her
To which the Master responded"truth that,i taught you that,but I also taught you that if you eye deceives you,remove it without remorse-so that you could serve me and you better"
To which I responded,"I get and I feel that,none will be let into the cottage,till we both sure,and about the ribs I'd see if they goo enough to be fit back into my body-to make me whole again."
If not,the no remorse
I guess I could always invite you for a nice chat
But then again you aways there;
To end in Jack's note-
"one day I will find the right words,and they would be simple".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/17/2015 12:19:00 PM
- Congratulations on your first poems here at P-Soup - A pleasure to welcome you, Kabelo :) - Hope you will find this page interesting and post many more thoughts and words in the future - Good luck :) - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:33:00 PM
Kabelo, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/16/2015 8:24:00 AM
Kabelo, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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