Father Figure

He sits there patiently waiting
always apologizing 
but never showing 
the true feelings he is hiding
he acts like he is one with us 
but he couldn't be further away
every day we say hello how are you
but never giving a true answer
we grow into a routine
school work dinner groan sleep repeat
again and again
what has this life become 
does he even see me anymore
even now that life's chaotic
we go down the dark hallways  
I can't tell who I'm looking at
Is it him or is it a stranger 
looking back at me 
and saying I love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Alex Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 4:04 AM
Beautifully written.
Wolf Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 5:16 PM
He's not himself... He may be in pain... He may have given up on this world's worth... I can tell you that I feel a bit of myself in him as I age. Be civil; be pleasant...Keep the faith. Intriguing write, Savannah. Best wishes, Gershon
Stars Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 8:07 PM
your heart will give you the answer ... ?... very intriguing piece ... thanks for sharing your thoughts ...
Quigley Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 2:40 PM
*hugs you tightly* Good write savannannananananananah. I love you and somewhere in him I know Guss does as well, he might just forget to show it. I wont....*tackel hugs you again*. You are loved more that you will ever know. I love you.
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