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Father And Son's Codes

How difficult it is to pursue A moral code that seems so trite For a young son whose modes are new Insisting his thoughts are alright When a bold mind creates a fight. But the choice to stand by my will And show reason to discipline With tough love, I claim and instill That harmful friends are not life's win; And praying our bond won't crack, as kin. Hard Choices Contest by Dr. Ram Mehta From J.Torrente

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Date: 7/7/2014 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on the write of this winning poem in the hard-choices-contes. Choices of fathers and sons are lessons of life and love.. and certainly not always easy to deal with.. but reason for a clash of "clans family/friends or their members '... Though! Dutch respectful greetings Elly
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Date: 7/4/2014 1:34:00 PM
Hi Juaneco, congratulations on a fine win.Best wishes.
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Date: 7/4/2014 9:58:00 AM
Juaneco, Congratulations, life's all about the hard choices we face on a daily base. Have a happy 4th of July... LUV LINDA
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Date: 7/4/2014 8:28:00 AM
A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, juaneco
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:09:00 PM
yes, this is a hard choice especially when kids start thinking on their own.. so well put, a winner for me.. thanks for your feedback, juaneco... huggs
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