Father

I beg you father
to break my chains,
and be mercy for me
the day i will reach 
in your holy world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 10:20 AM
He surely will my dear friend. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara
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August 4, 2009 at 3:10 AM
another great write of yours he will set you free, from the moment you said yes to him he said yes to you also, he broke my chains and he will answer your prayer, he is merciful and forgiving he is true and just, he will never break a promise, if you ask forgvness he will surley forgive he loves you, God bless you from diane
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