Fate's Twist

Between the dreamtime blackness
and the yawning dawn of lucid and pure dreams;
venture pure souls.

Pure dreams are free at birth to spirits;
made impure by ego,
a mortal pills “side effect”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ioane Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:52 AM
ML you do have a gift of visual perception when it comes to souls. Such insight depicted by a few words. Tiaua.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Good idea...strongly expressed in a few words.
Walker  Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Nice perception M.L. :). Verlena
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