Line Gauthier Poet Verse

Fate's Footfalls

Numbing echoes of vain haunting footfalls
Mute lingerings of ghosts and lovers past
A troubled hindsight of sleepless darkness
Buried forgotten times of long ago

Appeared the footsteps of fate, I followed
A path oozing myrrh and serenity
Leading me straight into your warm embrace
My world is now a blissful paradise



AP: 2nd place 2020

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Caren Krutsinger March 11, 2018 at 4:17 AM These words were chosen carefully, thoughtfully, and the metric rhythm is amazing. Good luck in the contest, Line. Line Gauthier March 11, 2018 at 10:44 AM Thanks so much for your warm visit and comment, Caren.

Silent One March 10, 2018 at 3:15 PM A happy ending... How lovely.. Line Gauthier March 10, 2018 at 3:23 PM There's always hope... and sometimes it pays off. Thanks for your visit, SO.

Jack Horne March 10, 2018 at 10:42 AM love this with such a heart-warming last line Line Gauthier March 10, 2018 at 3:24 PM Thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment, Jack.