Fate Twists

Undermining base
Furtive steps during a year
Revealed false foundation
Hidden behind three fake smiles
Discovering covered lies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michael Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Most certainly...You can't sit back and wait...You must venture out to find the way...Nice poetry...All the best Nayda
Negron Flores Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Thank you Arturo.
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 4:47 PM
A very deep tanka Nayda I despise being lied to and those fake smiles cant hide the lies - you just need to look at the eyes:-( hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 8:32 PM
Indeed Jan. Very wise words. Hugs, Nayda.
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