Fate of a Rose

True life of a rose
Carrier of emotions;
A sentence to death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 15, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Interesting perspective leaving the reader with a lot to think about. So much depth in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 10, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Abe, i just love poems with Roses, and i enjoyed this one>>James
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December 17, 2008 at 9:55 AM
Roses are symbols for many things. You have captured that well.
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December 5, 2008 at 2:53 PM
nice poem, you are really good. I enjoyed the comments you left me.
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December 4, 2008 at 4:54 PM
What a great haiku you penned here Abe. The sacrifice of a rose is sad. DN
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December 4, 2008 at 10:53 AM
i like your poem
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December 4, 2008 at 5:51 AM
Wow. There is so much here. A most excellent haiku! Well done. Love, Shar
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December 3, 2008 at 9:19 PM
Clever idea and nice imagery. I never thought of the sacrifice a rose makes as it carries our emotions. Our love is in fact the rose's death sentence. Brilliant haiku here...Raul
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