Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Fate Is Sealed

FATE IS SEALED

This road I've walked before 
I should know it so very well
Because it opened up a door
One that lead straight to hell

 I met a rider upon a dark steed
He asked me what's my pleasure
Then wondering if there's a deed
Or if perhaps any kind of treasure

Said I could be rich,even famous
Play the best guitar ones heard
Maybe I'd like the luck of shamus
Yes I could even sing like a bird

He asked  me so many questions 
After each I replied with "No"
wondered if I had any suggestions
Which I told him yes to just go

told me my wish was granted now
He'd be back in 10 years to collect
collect I ask and he just said wow
I should show him a bit more respect

Laughing said he just bought my soul
Confused I told him of my concern
Said should spend my time whole
laughing he said in ten I'll burn

Deja vu I hear beating hoofs again
There upon his steed silky smooth
Smiling he said shall we begin
I smiled telling him slow your groove

Confused he asked what was I up to
Said your the cross road demon right
Looking Leary said yes thats true
I said my dads the prince of night

Moral of this story if one was to be had
Always know with whom you do deal
As they should, so none can be mad
Never know it may be your fate you seal

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Quoth Theraven October 24, 2019 at 9:00 AM Brenda, I like this poem. Wonder how I missed it. I agree with the others who commented. It flows well as a write. And has a message of hope. -Richard Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 9:20 AM Thank you so much Richard I do enjoy your visits! ;)

John Fleming July 13, 2019 at 9:01 AM Well, Mistress Rhymer, it certainly does flow smoothly along...enjoyed the unexpected twist of fate at the end -- cleverly engineered! My warmest affections. :) john Brenda Chiri July 14, 2019 at 3:32 AM Hahaha Johnny was a fun write and it wasn't to end that way in the beginning! It's an old poem I found and decided to either finish it or toss it! So I revamped it! Thank you!;) All my affection!;)

Nick Trim July 12, 2019 at 7:12 PM I like the moral of the story and rhyme muppet, great work for a puppet Brenda Chiri July 13, 2019 at 1:10 AM Well thank you nick I'm so happy you do! Lol did you get the moral? Haha!;)

Gordon Mcconnell July 12, 2019 at 3:22 PM Nice piece Brenda, full of nice rhyme, flow and good imagery too. your moral words at the end are very true and well worth considering long and hard. Hope you're having a great day, hope to catch up soon, Have a great weekend, Gordon Brenda Chiri July 13, 2019 at 1:11 AM Ahhh Gordon thank you so much your words are appreciated!;)