Fate

Winter never surrenders,
It ploughs through the soul
And freezes the people.
For all time its fierce fangs
Inject bitter venom 
Into its victims.
Some fall prey of a sudden
Trapped beneath the surface 
Of the ice. Others fall asleep,
Unable to fight any longer.
Still some brave the bite 
For the sake of others
In order to help them
Safely return to spring.
Spring endures, 
But winter conquers, 
Such is life they say, 
Though they wish
It differently.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win with this very powerful poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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November 13, 2014 at 2:29 PM
Thank you and thank you! Although I'm a busy student/worker/dancer right now I hope I can peruse Poetry Soup a little more.
Mehta Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Amazing expressions, congrats on the win
S. Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:30 PM
Thank you, I wrote this awhile back, it was during the winter I believe!
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:51 PM
powerful descriptive write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 2:44 PM
left hand side of the page 'contests' go to Contest Winner: member' and all the contest winners are listed there. You can also go to top of the page 'member area' and 'my member contest entries' You got a second place:-) Hugs Jan xx
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November 13, 2014 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, although I'm confused as to what place I got. I couldn't find the page for the "C'est la vie" contest I entered. Any advice for a newbie?
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November 8, 2014 at 1:18 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mary Catherine - I choose your first very well written free verse - Great ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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