Fate

Together we sat under the rain
As it poured and soaked our hair
We laughed a lot until we cried
And cried until we laughed again

Memories long forgotten 
Have arrived yet one more time
Destroying sadness in our hearts
That was built by lonely crime

But deep inside we both knew
That one of us had to go
For fate had been awaiting
And that we both know

But what would be me 
And what would be her
If one of us wasn't there
So we decided...

Fate would drag us both to it!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 9:46 PM
Another awesome write!!!!
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October 22, 2012 at 7:55 AM
SO ENJOYED READING YOUR CREATIVE WRITE HABZY WITH FRAGILE IMAGERY LUV .. WELCOME TO PS ..PLEASE CONTINUE TO SHARE WRDS WITH LUV .. THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENT ON MY POETRY.
Lander Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 9:06 AM
It needs more work..Together we sat under the rain... obvious if you stand in the rain .. you would get wet.. (not dry) and you have a lot of force rhyme... rewrite this one...... sorry! good try.....though
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October 21, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Thank you for your advice I shall try my best to fix it.;D
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October 21, 2012 at 9:09 AM
Definition Poetry which holds the principles and ideals of beauty that are characteristic of Greek and Roman art, architecture, and literature. Example Eloisa to Abelard by Alexander Pope In these deep solitudes and awful cells, Where heav'nly-pensive contemplation dwells, And ever-musing melancholy reigns; What means this tumult in a vestal's veins? Why rove my thoughts beyond this last retreat? Why feels my heart its long-forgotten heat?
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