Fate

by the riverbank their paths crossed, both then turned back eyes locked, their hearts ignited By Zyrool

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2024 6:49:00 AM

Ahhh!! Romantic. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/23/2024 7:06:00 AM

Thanks, my friend. Stay Blessed.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/6/2024 9:24:00 PM

I'd start running. But I've been alone. I like this senryu.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/7/2024 10:20:00 AM

You made me laugh, to recall I the alligators along my local river.. So pleased you liked it. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Have a great weekend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/6/2024 2:38:00 PM

When fate arrives the heart feels certain of its path every time, thanks for this poem Zyrool

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/7/2024 10:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for your support, Rose it means a lot. I do agree with what you said..the heart just knows. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.