Fate


by the riverbank 
their paths crossed, both then  turned back
eyes locked, their hearts ignited




By Zyrool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Hello Zyrool, that is because they found each other. Hugs. Darlene/
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic. Sara K
Gifford Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Thanks, my friend. Stay Blessed.
Greenhough Avatar
September 6, 2024 at 9:24 PM
I'd start running. But I've been alone. I like this senryu.
Gifford Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 10:20 AM
You made me laugh, to recall I the alligators along my local river.. So pleased you liked it. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Have a great weekend.
Rose  Avatar
September 6, 2024 at 2:38 PM
When fate arrives the heart feels certain of its path every time, thanks for this poem Zyrool
Gifford Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 10:22 AM
Thank you so much for your support, Rose it means a lot. I do agree with what you said..the heart just knows. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.
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