Fate

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fate

The soft zephyr hums the carefree spirit of youth. A calf ruminates under the sun's gentle rays. Tomorrow, the slaughterhouse.

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Ink Empress

Date: 1/4/2024 10:48:00 AM

Brilliant how you always weave such deep and meaningful poems in just few syllables. I especially love your first line “ the sweet zephyr hums” and also the last line hits strong: love the imagery too. Pleasure reading this. Wishing you a blessed year ahead too

A. Ormulyce
Date: 1/4/2024 6:04:00 PM

Thank you so much. Your comments are always encouraging. I hope you're doing well. I wish you a wonderful year, with success, happiness, and health.