Fate

She wandered the moonlight caressed gardens of midnight
barefoot on the stone paths, floral scents filling her deeply.
Had she not planted the roses, would they not have grown?
She must believe in her choices, herself, but fate was always the master.

Yes, everything had bloomed accordingly to her thoughtful plan.
Seasonal blooms in perfect rooms, rows and rows perfectly groomed.
But the one thing she had never expected to raise alone
was the marbled grey, cool to the touch, lovers headstone.

For contest: eight lines of fate
date: 7-2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:34 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your writing is always magnificent. Well done! Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Wow poignant twist, Casarah. Well done. Congrats on your top win.
Gentry Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great poem about fate. A story of fate well told. :)
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:41 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Great analogy and use of metaphor Casarah.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:20 AM
You brought us there. Well done Casarah.
Man Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Cas, you are so creative! I think this will play very well for the contest!
Smith Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Excellent verse Cas...I've got many of them where love has gone to die...lol
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