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Fatal Attraction

Besotted, beguiled, bewitched,
I walked outwitted and benumbed
into her web of love willingly.
She stared at me like  
a black widow sizing up her prey.

     What draws a moth
     to flirt with the flame
     or a nimblest fish  
     to bite the deceitful bait?
     What lures a fawn
     to step on the snare?
     What heavenly bliss do
     fools in love seek to attain?

As the moth 
singes in the flame
and brings not its wings 
to steer away
Nor the feisty fawn 
set itself free
try as it may,
So does he 
who’s smitten with love 
to wiggle and thrash about
like the foolish fish
until his last breath!

He who dallies with a maiden
With rue his heart is soon laden,
Dabble not with this flame of love--
A firestorm from the heavens above.
         Slip away, oh, slip away
         at the first light of day!


~Form: 3 Freedom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/31/2017 5:59:00 PM
Interesting use of mixed forms Abdul, and one of the best "topic" poems entered.
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Date: 5/31/2017 5:54:00 PM
Freedom's flame! Congrats!
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