Fat Love

Overwhelm me with your fat love. Smothered by its calories. A weight of love that breaks a scale. A love unbelievable,a loony tale. Lifted by loving sparks,I seem to sail. Feed me your loving chips,chocolates and honey dips. Smothered all over your minty fresh lips. If any left overs i'll store in my heart. A love never hungry or torn apart.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/18/2012 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Elliott. Love, Carol

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/18/2012 12:08:00 AM

Congrats on your wonderful win Elliott.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2012 4:16:00 PM

ELLIOTT,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD

Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/15/2012 8:53:00 PM

OOOOOOOH okay THIS is love, "never hungry or torn apart"

Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/11/2012 9:52:00 AM

Rather sweetly put. A real slice of decadence.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/11/2012 12:56:00 PM

thank you..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2012 10:23:00 PM

Quite original this is. It reminds me of a poem I once wrote called Choco mania Mania, love me like chocolate!! I love fat love!!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/11/2012 12:56:00 PM

Thank you..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2012 10:15:00 PM

Elliott, your love is way into the deep frying pan *<(;-)~ I love the calorie image..lol..image if love was like the calories we love eating.. and than have to burn. The ozone layer would destroy itself more. Once all the fat love calories are being watched. Every calorie will burn in the thin air, everytime love loses weight.. and becomes skinny, without them minty fresh lips. I'm gonna count my heartbeats xoxox~ love the spark here.. an excellent poem..always..PD,

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/9/2012 11:01:00 PM

thank you...your insight is deep.God bless you.Dont let the bed bugs bite

Susan Simpkins

Date: 4/9/2012 8:53:00 PM

nicely written

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/9/2012 8:57:00 PM

Thank you.