Fat Love

Overwhelm me with your fat love.

Smothered by its calories.

A weight of love that breaks a scale.

A love  unbelievable,a loony tale.

Lifted by loving sparks,I seem to sail.

Feed me your loving chips,chocolates and honey dips.

Smothered all over your minty fresh lips. 

If any left overs i'll store in my heart.

A love never hungry or torn apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
Rozario Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 12:08 AM
Congrats on your wonderful win Elliott.
A   Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 4:16 PM
ELLIOTT,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD
Britt Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 8:53 PM
OOOOOOOH okay THIS is love, "never hungry or torn apart"
Allen Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Rather sweetly put. A real slice of decadence.
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 12:56 PM
thank you..
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 10:23 PM
Quite original this is. It reminds me of a poem I once wrote called Choco mania Mania, love me like chocolate!! I love fat love!!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Thank you..
A   Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 10:15 PM
Elliott, your love is way into the deep frying pan *<(;-)~ I love the calorie image..lol..image if love was like the calories we love eating.. and than have to burn. The ozone layer would destroy itself more. Once all the fat love calories are being watched. Every calorie will burn in the thin air, everytime love loses weight.. and becomes skinny, without them minty fresh lips. I'm gonna count my heartbeats xoxox~ love the spark here.. an excellent poem..always..PD,
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 11:01 PM
thank you...your insight is deep.God bless you.Dont let the bed bugs bite
Simpkins Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 8:53 PM
nicely written
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Thank you.
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