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Fat Cats and Lawyers

Sharp Suited Sharks Feeding Fervently Feasting, Foul Fiends Covetous Cuthroats, Cultured Convicts Convincing Innocents Inked In Immensely Incurred Interests, Indebted Enslaved, Effaced Emotions, Exasperated

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Ruby Honeytip

Date: 7/3/2013 5:23:00 PM

Hmmmmm.....lawyers and banksters!! Not my favourite personality types! I lean towards poets actually. This is a passionate write! Really cool..... Love Roobs x

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/19/2013 8:25:00 AM

Exceptional descriptions put into amazing alliteration. :)

Donna Jones

Date: 6/16/2013 3:47:00 PM

Awesome...read this several times and loved it some more!!!!

David Fisher

Date: 6/15/2013 9:21:00 AM

Such sure symbolisms. Lots of fun to read.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/13/2013 11:05:00 AM

The Master of Alliteration ,you!!!!! You so good, too. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/13/2013 6:57:00 AM

Entertaining effacing engaging exceptional

Kim Van Breda

Date: 6/13/2013 2:29:00 AM

Great Alliteration. Lawyers and Loan sharks depicted to perfection!! I tried my first serious Alliteration with my "I AM A POEM" and really enjoyed it... Thanks for stopping by my poems.