Fat

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fat each cell expertly hangs on like a brown leaf in springtime clinging for dear life, then falls in a storm gone?

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John Lawless

Date: 8/21/2023 12:56:00 PM

..."like a brown leaf in springtime'....and as hard to get rid of......

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2023 2:51:00 PM

Got that right, John. Life can put it on, and diligence is needed to take it off. LOL.. Your visit added a special touch. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/20/2023 6:53:00 PM

Phat means excellent! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2023 2:25:00 AM

Kim, slang to mean Pretty Hot and Tempting. I was not meaning that kind of fat for sure in my poem. LOL..Of course, for some men a large woman is just that. I had an Uncle who would say of a large woman man, she is built. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/18/2023 4:53:00 PM

Phat!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2023 8:06:00 AM

Love the humor in return but I am not really familiar with the Phat very much but have been exposed enough to know it is either a kid's movie or toy or a song or a group or something. LOL..Way behind the times in Ga. Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/15/2023 5:58:00 PM

a lovely and great imagery, enjoyed really yann

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/16/2023 4:14:00 AM

Yann, Your visit is like a breath of fresh air. Thank you. Sara