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fat each cell expertly hangs on like a brown leaf in springtime clinging for dear life, then falls in a storm gone?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/21/2023 12:56:00 PM
..."like a brown leaf in springtime'....and as hard to get rid of......
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2023 2:51:00 PM
Got that right, John. Life can put it on, and diligence is needed to take it off. LOL.. Your visit added a special touch. Sara
Date: 8/20/2023 6:53:00 PM
Phat means excellent! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/21/2023 2:25:00 AM
Kim, slang to mean Pretty Hot and Tempting. I was not meaning that kind of fat for sure in my poem. LOL..Of course, for some men a large woman is just that. I had an Uncle who would say of a large woman man, she is built. Sara
Date: 8/18/2023 4:53:00 PM
Phat!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2023 8:06:00 AM
Love the humor in return but I am not really familiar with the Phat very much but have been exposed enough to know it is either a kid's movie or toy or a song or a group or something. LOL..Way behind the times in Ga. Sara
Date: 8/15/2023 5:58:00 PM
a lovely and great imagery, enjoyed really yann
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/16/2023 4:14:00 AM
Yann, Your visit is like a breath of fresh air. Thank you. Sara
Date: 8/15/2023 12:38:00 PM
Hi, Sara. I like this. I think the 5 syllable line lacks an extra syllable. You could say "the" spring.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2023 2:34:00 PM
Andrea, Yes, I see my mistake. Thanks for the notification of it. Sara
Date: 8/15/2023 11:43:00 AM
Nice Ninette, Sara, we don't see many of them. You enclosed the message well in your poem. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2023 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. I appreciate the visit. The day is nearly gone but the memory of it lingers on. Sara
Date: 8/15/2023 8:03:00 AM
Expertly written Ninette and very original.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2023 9:58:00 AM
Victor, probably would have to apply poetic license to get by with it. Sara
Date: 8/15/2023 6:17:00 AM
Such great imagery is just breathtaking, Sara. Your expertise in Ninette writing is commendable.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2023 9:58:00 AM
Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara

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