Fasting and Me

I have been fasting in full
Every Ramadan month’s call
I do feel hungry and thirsty
But sometimes uncomfortable
But I like anything doing it
I put it my heart and mind
I persevered and be patient
Eventually it stops the problem.

Fasting makes my body feel good
It benefits my health and well being
I can keep my fasting firmly
Not asking my non-Muslim away eating
If they do even keeping my faith
It doesn’t mean disrespect
It is to me a test of my faith
I do love this for Allah’s sake.

I do see a lot them eating and drinking
But I don’t get tempted to do
Even sometimes I am teased to try
Then we get a good laugh
Then my fasting remain
I don’t need to pretend  
My fasting won’t disappear
Even when I see sip their drinks. 



25June15-KK-10:58PM

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Date: 1/25/2016 12:31:00 PM
Fasting is not for everyone. I see strength and discipline and good sharing. I once fasted for three days. the first two was the hardest; I went out and jogged four miles on the third day and glided through the air, it was fantastic. Light and pleasant experience. Thank you for stopping by my page.
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Date: 1/25/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thanks much Iris. Appreciate your write. Will always love poems. Your poems have the hearts.
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