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Poetic Form: Elegy
Inspired: 2024 July 14
Image: N/A
Attempts to defraud my
poetic values via
the varied poetic
formats

My eyes were drawn to a perfect one
yet 'Im' turned out as a mere prefix-
seeing my error, I was in need
of a third eye

I thought this was it
but it was another
mistake, so I tried
to correct it

But I created a
problem that I
tried to fix

But it turned
into a mess
and as all
trails do
lead, to
a trial 

And in truth 
on the stand
Bible in hand
I lied and on
I chose Elegy
appropriately

Today, a ...
poet died
using ...
A.I.

"p.s., Bible is a good indicator that the rest post/past, A.I. use, zilch, nada, nicht, nein, Trump-O-Biden tix."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/14/2024 8:27:00 PM
A port died using AI. I sure enjoyed seeing that part. I am pretty sure this elegy isn't your own, sir port.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/14/2024 8:58:00 PM
Me, Andrea, never in a day-light! No A-rtificial I-ntelligence here, just moi, A-nti I-ndividualist, Aloha William
Date: 7/14/2024 4:03:00 PM
a pop culture take on the theme, hilo ...bury AI lol
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/14/2024 6:35:00 PM
Mabuhay (toastless) Nette, as my cousins in Pagasinan and Ilocos Norte say no Moon Fish for A.I., Salamat, Aloha William
Date: 7/14/2024 2:53:00 PM
Farewell, farewell. Alas, we hardly knew ye... AI poets bite
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Hilo Poet
Date: 7/14/2024 3:20:00 PM
Woody, again (was) in a bind, opt Forget o'er this. Like Craig's, Peter for Jimmy Stew...a tad other?, AI.oha (aka A.I. (state-run) Ofc of Haw'n Affr's) William
Date: 7/14/2024 12:42:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write with a Great Ending. I have also written about AI. Looks like it is here to stay.  "Good Luck" Have a blessed day............
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Date: 7/14/2024 1:05:00 PM
Indeed, 'tis a blessing as always whenever you, Paula, are at the other end, Aloha William

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