Tonytocaa Camacho Poet Ode

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Farewell My Child

At Gateway yin

Long sham temple

Pink laced Taipei doll

 Sealed Carmine red lips 

Chiseled etched 

Fine porcelain 

From the four 

Corners horn 

Erected  during 

monsoon

Dragon tail rains 

Swept gale winds

Funnel golden sand

Through pearly whites

That smile no more

Slighting the whitest Pearl

Ever Beautiful

Lifeless love soul

Dress eroded salty seas 

Passages are lingering..

Echoes

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Janet Eaton February 8, 2015 at 7:55 PM Tonytocca this is so well written showing such sadness. Hugs to you. Janet Tonytocaa Camacho February 8, 2015 at 8:15 PM Janet,thank you for your support and kind words,it's greatly appreciated..much lov to you...tonytocaa ??

Jan Allison February 6, 2015 at 2:44 PM such vibrant yet deep and sad imagery - incredibly descriptive write:-) hugs jan xx Tonytocaa Camacho February 6, 2015 at 7:38 PM Thank you jan,sometimes one has to mask the pain the hurt and write about others sadness..thank you for your kind and moving words?? tony