Farewell Jimmy Cricket

Alone in my room... Bored and hungry With no food to consume I look at a corner... A cricket "Hello, Jimmy, it's an honour." My room became his... My new room-mate My heart was filled wit bliss Day 3, knocked off at five Jimmy still in my room "Come on, let's get you a wife." I offered him to nature Jimmy hopped with joy Too bad I can't denature It is a dangerous world Lizard caught Jimmy... I froze in angst as Jimmy twirled
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May Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 9:33 AM
nicely written Stefanus,,,,a sad end for Jimmy,,,.keep writing
Palmer Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 7:43 AM
poor old Jimmy,now you see why he was hiding in your room,he is a wanted cricket,lol,great write Stefanus
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November 29, 2012 at 5:49 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Stefanus. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol
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