Farewell Dream Weaver

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tossed in restless sleep surrounded by shadowed hands farewell dream weaver

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/6/2017 8:05:00 AM

Nightmares can be terrifying at times, well written, Lin:)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/5/2017 9:27:00 AM

The Sandman is snoozing...great dreamless write Lin...best wishes...^WW^

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/5/2017 4:31:00 AM

What a magnificent write my friend! I truly loved reading this illustrious piece this morning! This poem was very chilling, a serious and fearful piece! What a stunning poem, Great Work!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/4/2017 5:26:00 PM

Sent shivers down my spine!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2017 2:55:00 PM

I found the poem quite chilling Lin you need the sand man to sprinkle some moon dust on you:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/4/2017 12:27:00 PM

farewell to your dream of shadowed hands...sometimes a dream can give the sense it's real

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/4/2017 8:55:00 AM

This one gives me a chill. Well expressed. Also thanks for visiting and commenting on my latest piece.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/4/2017 9:34:00 AM

Thank you very much, Rick.