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Farewell

I love you, and my love to you everybody have known well I don’t know how I would bear your eternal farewell Your perfume in my noise I still can smell And no body I could about my anguish to tell I could only cry and your name to yell Your love in my heart forever will dwell I promised you not to cry, but a warm, silent tear I felt on my cheek I don’t ask anything, but your coming back to me now I seek You’re very far going To get you back it’s not possible doing But not to quit your love I’ve taken an oath Since separation we can’t bear both In my life I still need you but you vanished Living without you tortures, and me punished I don’t know how another time to love But the only thing I know is that you’re in the sky above A very deep fire tortures inside, a stove That burnt the meaning of life in me and I become a lost dove Stumbling in the clouds with two broken wings Between life and death my soul swings I used to see your face every morning And now I’m dying everyday in your mourning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/14/2019 6:25:00 AM
Emotional poem. Farewell is always hard and heartbreaking, no one can accept it easily and it takes time to be healed. Well done!
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Date: 1/13/2014 12:33:00 PM
Hafssa, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Hafssa Aj
Date: 1/13/2014 2:37:00 PM
hello SKAT , thank u so much for ur comment , I relly appreciate that my new poet friend :)
Date: 1/13/2014 11:09:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Hafssa- I choose your first touching poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Hafssa Aj
Date: 1/13/2014 2:38:00 PM
ah thx Anna for ur support , I hope that u 'll enjoy my poems in the future my new poet friend
Date: 1/13/2014 10:53:00 AM
very deep, Hafssa , well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Hafssa Aj
Date: 1/13/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thx Linda .It's a pleasure for me to be here among Poetry Soup famliy

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