Farewell

I love you, and my love to you everybody have known well
I don’t know how I would bear your eternal farewell
Your perfume in my noise I still can smell 
And no body I could about my anguish to tell
I could only cry and your name to yell
Your love in my heart forever will dwell
I promised you not to cry, but a warm, silent tear I felt on my cheek
I don’t ask anything, but your coming back to me now I seek
You’re very far going	
To get you back it’s not possible doing
But not to quit your love I’ve taken an oath	
Since separation we can’t bear both
In my life I still need you but you vanished
Living without you tortures, and me punished
I don’t know how another time to love
But the only thing I know is that you’re in the sky above
A very deep fire tortures inside, a stove
That burnt the meaning of life in me and I become a lost dove
Stumbling in the clouds with two broken wings
Between life and death my soul swings
I used to see your face every morning
And now I’m dying everyday in your mourning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Matta Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 6:25 AM
Emotional poem. Farewell is always hard and heartbreaking, no one can accept it easily and it takes time to be healed. Well done!
A  Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 12:33 PM
Hafssa, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Aj Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 2:37 PM
hello SKAT , thank u so much for ur comment , I relly appreciate that my new poet friend :)
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 11:09 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Hafssa- I choose your first touching poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Aj Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 2:38 PM
ah thx Anna for ur support , I hope that u 'll enjoy my poems in the future my new poet friend
A   Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 10:53 AM
very deep, Hafssa , well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Aj Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Thx Linda .It's a pleasure for me to be here among Poetry Soup famliy
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