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Farewell

~He Left~

I woke up blind 
with no light 
unable to fight back 
I couldn't understand why 
you left my hand 
allowing yourself 
to pretend 
it was a love approaching 
than you ended it 
never told me
it`s a dead end.

I had no back entrance to my heart
all doors were sealed 
when you made 
me bleed, 
couldn't begin to heal 
my pain overturned
my decision to deal
with my coming minutes 
seconds and hours
awake ready to break
any door even to crawl
on the floor and survive 
before I dive deeper 
into an ocean
none desire to coop
with the raging waves
my love was done
I will float till a boat
could find me or none.
 
Therese Bacha
25/5/2013

Copyright © Therese Bacha | Year Posted 2013

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Michael Ainsley Date: 6/25/2013 9:36:00 PM I feel you diving within yourself; Beautiful poem. How fast things change. How often we must deal with that change. Each day like someone hooked on sorrow i Say to myself Be happy today and Iam. Be Happy Therese. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/25/2013 9:51:00 PM Hello dear Michael. Don't worry about me, I swear I am happy, I enjoy my moments every second, I love to be alone in my apartment, I love writing, my TV shows, talking to my sister through Skype, she lives in Calgary Alberta, I travel usually for 5 months to stay with my son in San Francisco, as he has a triplex and he leaves the studio down for me. Bye have a great evening. Terry xo

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/20/2013 4:24:00 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/20/2013 5:48:00 PM Hi Sara, thank you so much. I am fine. Terry

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/14/2013 12:29:00 PM As always a beautiful poem you have written. A farewell is always sad. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/14/2013 5:08:00 PM Hi Lucy, so nice to see you, thank you, I am fine.Dont worry. Love Terry xoxo

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/8/2013 7:00:00 PM Very strong and carru deep emotions sweet lady..touched my heart and soul Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/14/2013 5:07:00 PM Hi Charmaine, thank you so much, for now and your email. I am doing great. Love Terry

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/8/2013 6:58:00 PM pls do send me an e mail when you can cause somwhow i can t find your email address with my contacts dear. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/8/2013 7:48:00 PM I already did send you an email. Don't worry I am fine. Terry xo

Dan Kearley Date: 5/30/2013 11:01:00 PM Well, well!.... I better find me a boat! We can't have any of this going on... :o) Twas quite the heart piercer! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/30/2013 11:15:00 PM Hi Dan, long time i did not see you, like your new picture. Thank you so much for passing by, as usual, so nice of you. Love Terry xo

Donna Jones Date: 5/28/2013 6:37:00 PM T..I feel familiar with your words...I have been alone only two years of my almost 54..although among the hurt and loneliness I felt despair I also found strength in confidence of I'm an OK person alone..I opened up to strangers and lonely children and found so many people need more than passion. Its that different love that satisfies me anyway the most..but I hope you find that person who deserves you...great poem.. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/28/2013 7:53:00 AM Dear Terry, I hope this is just a wonderful poem and nothing more than that! I can't bear the thought you are in distress and unhappy! A 7! May God be with you for you have been through a lot lately! Thank you for visiting Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/28/2013 8:13:00 AM Demetrios, my sincere friend, no I am fine. I am so happy you liked the poem, as I am trying to change. Hope you healthy and happy. Love Terry xoxoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/27/2013 11:46:00 AM - A heartbreaking poem Terry! - Very well written my friend! - Have a nice day. - Big hug to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 5/27/2013 10:47:00 AM wonderful poetry, so profound, just lovely Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/27/2013 11:17:00 AM Hi Harry, so nice of you to pass by. Thank you so much. Terry xoxo

Elai Cee Date: 5/26/2013 7:57:00 AM wew!!! it has a strong and powerful message for the bleeding hearts. really feel the emotions here... thumbs up for it! i can relate lol----GOd bless u---Elai Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/26/2013 12:41:00 PM Hi Elai, new friend, thank you for passing by, glad you enjoyed reading it. Terry xo

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/26/2013 12:32:00 AM Your emotions just pour out here and I really get the essence of "farewell" I just loved how the last several lines all so easily fell into that nice rhyming pattern, Terry. I have a few more comments to get to and then I'll call it a night.Hope you have a wonderful Sunday. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/26/2013 12:40:00 PM Thank you Andrea, I liked it to. Love Terry

Russell Sivey Date: 5/25/2013 8:13:00 PM This is a powerfully emotional write my friend! You have filled me with tears with this tearful poem! I am in awe with the incredible way you have crafted this awesome piece! What an amazing poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/25/2013 8:45:00 PM Hello my friend Russell, how are you doing? Thank you again for your wonderful encouraging sharing. So nice of you. Love Terry xoxo