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Faraway Lover

far, yet can I hear your heartbeats like gunfire rumbling in the distance




Wow me with a one-liner! Monoku Contest/Winner(2nd Place)
Sponsored by Silent One
Date written and posted:05/30/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Wow, Edward. Terrific. Congrats on your most deserving top win.
Ibeh Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Thank you so much, Line!:-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Nicely done, Edward. Congrats for your win.
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!:-) Much appreciated.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Wow! This is such a remarkable monoku, deserving of being so high on the winner's list! Congratulation, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:31 AM
That's awfully kind of you, Pandita!:-) Thank you for your lovely comments and visit! xoxo
Gentry Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Congratulations on your placement!
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 6:05 AM
Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Susan!*hugs*
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 6:05 AM
- Congratulations with your one line, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 6:16 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise!:-)
One Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 5:18 AM
distant love is very difficult.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ibeh Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Many many thanks for placing me in your contest, Silent One! It's greatly gratifying and humbling.
Warrior Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Great one-liner my friend...best of luck Edward...love and light...^WW^
Ibeh Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 6:18 AM
Thanks for the wonderful, supportive comment, Winged Warrior!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Beautiful tribute for long distance love.
Ibeh Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!:-)
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