Faraway

How often, sullen memories reel from faraway climb, down to heart’s raw drop because these buried thoughts do bring to life again vignettes of young adult's fire - --brushing lip to lip. And neither of us dared follow our vow’s pledge.. you shrank away from the taste of life's whims, and I from the fear of the deep passion inside. for those memories have lashed me like a whip. The indelible kisses of the past, pressed on the pages of revelry's rhymes, like the veinless leaves of autumn's parole, granted in the place of winter's long blast have allowed us to fearlessly roam-- assaulting a love that need not go wrong. Skat's Best Love Poem #2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Devnath  Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Nunez Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Again I am awed by the delicacy of your lines, Nette. Congrats! huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Very emotive n heartfelt poem nette! Congrats on big win!
A  Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Nette. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT
Poet Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Wonderful poem!Love it:)
Onna Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 11:01 AM
You pulled me in from start to finish.So bittersweet and just pensive for a young love to fade. I can feel that "nail upon a bosom"; that's phenomenal!Glad to be part of your latest contest.Many thanks, Nette
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Creative and passionate work expressed in these lines..It reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Sabre Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Off to different ports, this speaks of nostalgia, young love and short revery. Brilliant poem from your quill!
Kiser Avatar
July 25, 2015 at 12:04 AM
A wonderful word painting, which took me away.
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