Far Sighted

It takes more sight than you would see
                    To love the soul that belongs to me.


9/24/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Hi Michelle, an ingenious write my friend, indeed clever. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rose  Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Ah, this one is brilliant, so many forget to adore their own souls, I must remember this line, can I borrow it sometime ?
Wolf Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 8:01 PM
'Cheeky,' as Julie Andrews/Mary Poppins once said! Cheers, Gershon
Leffanta Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 11:22 AM
What? Pheromones are not soul-worthy?
Y. Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 9:25 AM
WoW! Michelle, This is so well they well written and deep. Is it for the contest? Have a wonderful weekend:-)Alexis
Faulkner Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Well at first I put it in, then changed my mind and put in my other couplet 'cloudy skies' - thanks for your comment~
Radice Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Your couplets run deep Michelle. Great read. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary
Faulkner Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Thank you, Gary, it is appreciated~
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September 24, 2021 at 10:57 PM
Michelle, Very nice sight and soul in your 'Far Sighted'. Next time I'll remember to bring spectacles. Have a nice week-end. -Richard
Faulkner Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Ironically, I'm quite near - sighted! Thanks for your comment~
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