Paloma P Poet Prose Poetry

Far Side of Moonbeams

I adore you on the far side

of tranquil moonbeams &

admiration's transcendence,

'tween hard knocks & wonder

amidst breath's appreciation,

misfortunes' adversity naught to

e'er lessen breadth of affection,

dimensions beyond unfathomable

depths of reverent inclinations,

tenderness surpassing worldly feats

within endearments' heartprint,

there could be no greater love than

a grateful mother for her child

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Edward Mccall November 5, 2016 at 12:02 PM :) That says it all.

Ovidiu Bocsa October 28, 2016 at 11:27 AM Shinning moon, mysterious moon of poets with heartprint deep and full of hope and grace. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:05 AM Much appreciate your poetic review.

Jan Allison October 28, 2016 at 10:44 AM such a touching write Palmoa and I agree the bond between a mother and child is so so strong. I can relate to all Alexis says:-) hugs jan xx Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:04 AM Thanks so much Jan. :)

Alexis Y. October 28, 2016 at 9:31 AM Hi Paloma, I've heard of the strong bond between mother and child and me and my mom have a strong bond.However when I became a mother myself words fall short on expressing how strong that bond is . I felt and experienced that bond before my child even uttered a sound. I enjoyed the read: -)Alexis Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:04 AM Thanks Alexis, I so understand what you're saying. :) Jan Allison October 28, 2016 at 10:45 AM the bond I have with my mother is so so much stronger since my father died:-) And I can relate to every word about becoming a mother :-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green October 28, 2016 at 7:26 AM The beauty of your poem is only surpassed by the beauty of its message. Indeed, there is nothing stronger, deeper or more fierce than a mother's love. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:02 AM Many thanks Chris, as the beauty of your review. :)

White Wolf October 28, 2016 at 5:30 AM This is so beautiful Paloma, I see you're still waving, Ha. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:01 AM At you Rick, many thanks! :)

Probir Gupta October 28, 2016 at 5:25 AM We adore too ... and read it over and over again ... touchy ... Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:01 AM Of course you do, but I can't write from that POV. :) Thanks Probir.