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Far Side of Moonbeams

I adore you on the far side

of tranquil moonbeams &

admiration's transcendence,

'tween hard knocks & wonder

amidst breath's appreciation,

misfortunes' adversity naught to

e'er lessen breadth of affection,

dimensions beyond unfathomable

depths of reverent inclinations,

tenderness surpassing worldly feats

within endearments' heartprint,

there could be no greater love than

a grateful mother for her child

Copyright © Paloma P | Year Posted 2016

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Edward Mccall Date: 11/5/2016 12:02:00 PM :) That says it all. Login to Reply

Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 10/28/2016 11:27:00 AM Shinning moon, mysterious moon of poets with heartprint deep and full of hope and grace. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 10:05:00 AM Much appreciate your poetic review.

Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2016 10:44:00 AM such a touching write Palmoa and I agree the bond between a mother and child is so so strong. I can relate to all Alexis says:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 10:04:00 AM Thanks so much Jan. :)

Alexis Y. Date: 10/28/2016 9:31:00 AM Hi Paloma, I've heard of the strong bond between mother and child and me and my mom have a strong bond.However when I became a mother myself words fall short on expressing how strong that bond is . I felt and experienced that bond before my child even uttered a sound. I enjoyed the read: -)Alexis Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 10:04:00 AM Thanks Alexis, I so understand what you're saying. :) Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2016 10:45:00 AM the bond I have with my mother is so so much stronger since my father died:-) And I can relate to every word about becoming a mother :-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 10/28/2016 7:26:00 AM The beauty of your poem is only surpassed by the beauty of its message. Indeed, there is nothing stronger, deeper or more fierce than a mother's love. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 10:02:00 AM Many thanks Chris, as the beauty of your review. :)

White Wolf Date: 10/28/2016 5:30:00 AM This is so beautiful Paloma, I see you're still waving, Ha. Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 10:01:00 AM At you Rick, many thanks! :)

Probir Gupta Date: 10/28/2016 5:25:00 AM We adore too ... and read it over and over again ... touchy ... Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 11/1/2016 10:01:00 AM Of course you do, but I can't write from that POV. :) Thanks Probir.