Far Out

Fruit loops emerge

from a neon psychedelic sea 

of crumbly waves






Written on 8/2/2015
Picture #7
Colom Lune

fantasyimageryfree verse

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Mary Rotman

August 23, 2015 at 4:25 PM

I used the same theme. I hope it worked out better for you, lol. I am fast becoming a fan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 16, 2015 at 11:05 PM

What a wonderful imagery Laura! Congrats on big win!

Laura Leiser

August 21, 2015 at 11:14 AM

Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Kim Merryman

August 16, 2015 at 10:27 PM

You definitely thought outside the box for this one, Laura! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Laura Leiser

August 21, 2015 at 11:15 AM

The picture prompted the craziness, Kim! Thanks for your kind words :)

Poet Destroyer A

August 16, 2015 at 8:43 PM

wonderful win. PD

Laura Leiser

August 21, 2015 at 11:15 AM

Thanks, Linda :)

Skat A

August 16, 2015 at 1:40 AM

laura, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love

Laura Leiser

August 16, 2015 at 3:34 PM

Thanks, Skat :)

Jan Allison

August 15, 2015 at 7:29 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

August 15, 2015 at 2:41 PM

Thanks, Jan :)

Casarah Nance

August 15, 2015 at 7:14 AM

Ha, this was a great take on the prompt, grats on your win!

Laura Leiser

August 15, 2015 at 2:09 PM

Thanks, Casarah:)

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2015 at 1:14 AM

this was SO COOL. It reminded me of one written by a hippy! The crumbly waves is what put you into the third place! Congrats.

Laura Leiser

August 15, 2015 at 2:08 PM

Thanks for the placement, Andrea :) I'm so glad you like it!

Paul Callus

August 7, 2015 at 6:14 AM

Hi Laura! I just had to go back and look up visual#7. I had no idea what it really was, but the lovely imagery of your Lune enlightened this semi-abstract picture. gl in the contest. // paul

Laura Leiser

August 15, 2015 at 2:42 PM

Thanks so much, Paul! I appreciate it :)

Paul Callus

August 15, 2015 at 5:50 AM

And back again, Laura, this time with most deserved congratulations!:) Well done! ~ paul