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far off memories like scattered dreams lie dormant waiting to come to life and haunt hurt cause negative emotions good dreams where are you hiding those wonderful dreams with grand emotions are you layered deep within the recesses of those cogs where the wheels have not turned in a very long time?

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Date: 12/13/2023 8:03:00 AM
Yes sometimes sad memories drains our energy,well penned...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2023 2:34:00 PM
Your comments made my day, Harsha. Thank you for the visit. Sara K
Date: 12/11/2023 8:30:00 PM
Sad that we are constantly visited by sad memories. We wonder where all small memories are hiding ! "are you layered deep within the recesses of those cogs where the wheels have not turned in a very long time?". Love this poignant question at the end.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2023 3:49:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Your visits add a special touch. Sara K
Date: 12/6/2023 9:19:00 AM
Hi~ i buried past hurts. Plenty of present hurt comesout of nowhere. So, I omly live for this day, i wont allow past hurts to run me. They were some of life’s hard lessons. You exoress yourself quite well. Great video! Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/6/2023 11:45:00 AM
I get your clarification..thank you..thanks. Pangie xxxx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2023 11:28:00 AM
Yes, Panagiota, it is best to put the past in the past, forgiving ourselves where we failed, forgive others where they failed, but we don't forget and those things can surface once again in a dream or during the day from some unusual happening, odor(scent), or some crazy memory can pop-up. Thanks for the kind review and great advice. Your presence is always appreciated. Sara K
Date: 12/4/2023 11:26:00 PM
Oh yes, the rollercoaster ride of memories that can bring many poignant emotions to life & then our souls yearn to feel the soft sunshine of beautiful dreams which can ascend us from the tormenting pain.. A very evocative and meaningful piece, dear Sara. I can deeply resonate with the feelings that you've woven.. Beautifully inked! Sending you love & light...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2023 5:09:00 AM
Why, thank you, Hiya. I appreciate the uplifting review of my work. Sara K
Date: 12/4/2023 12:57:00 PM
What an illuminating poem on retrieving more good memories instead of the bad, sorrowful ones. Stellar write, Sara. Many Yuletide blessings to you and your family. ~
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2023 2:12:00 PM
Your Yuletide blessings are appreciated,Regina. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K
Date: 12/3/2023 8:37:00 PM
It's funny how a smell or a song can bring those memories to the surface. A shame it brings unpleasant ones to the surface too. Tom
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2023 2:58:00 AM
Yes, Tom, at one time some little something would bring back a memory from long ago, but it has not happened for a very long time. Thanks for dropping by and for taking time to leave a kind review of my work. Sara K
Date: 12/3/2023 12:19:00 PM
Very nice , Sara. I think I don't let memories affect me. I guess I never had negative ones terrible enough to haunt me. My problem is dealing with pain caused by a drug I was urged to take . This is why I have no trust in Big Pharma.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 4:30:00 PM
Andrea, I am sorry for the pain that is caused by a side effect from a prescription drug that you took. I am sorry that it seems it is permanent. I hope that something will show up to make it go away. Thank you for the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 12/3/2023 8:14:00 AM
A lot of age related poems from you today.. this one is also deep..
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, SO. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 12/3/2023 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. Few words with much said. So very true...  Have a wonderful day..................
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 8:08:00 AM
Why, thank you, Paula. I appreciate the offer of a wonderful day. I think it will be. Sara K
Date: 12/3/2023 4:34:00 AM
I can resonate with this because sometimes i feel the same way about memories… how they lie dormant waiting. Beautiful verse so well delivered dear sara. Pleasure always reading you. Sending you light always
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 8:07:00 AM
Thank you, IE. I need the Light of The World to shine on and in me so thank you. Sara K

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