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Far Far Away

Far far away Beyond the plains Beyond where you and I can see In the heights of the mountains Lies a little place Where once maybe A god used to reside But I do not know for sure And over there Is a shrine It does not have any idol No one comes to pray But it is spiritual And godly In it's own sense Underneath the shrine There lies an earthen pot With a scroll inside Which has text in an ancient language And smells like cinnamon and flowers The old scroll Now dusty and dirty Is still very valuable It contains The secret to happiness And maybe one day When you and I master the language Of the early men and women We will be as happy And as contented As Adam and Eve were When they first came here

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Date: 1/27/2020 7:53:00 AM
You write so well.
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/28/2020 12:34:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 1/25/2020 7:26:00 AM
WOW! Your talent shines in this poem, Aditi--saw you on the winner's list for JUMP.
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/26/2020 5:43:00 AM
thankyou so much!
Date: 1/20/2020 2:41:00 AM
I think it is not far far away.. Our mind-mirrors reflects it to distant lands.. In fact it is so near, but far to reach.. Unless the right vessel for sail..
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/26/2020 5:43:00 AM
that's an interesting take on it

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