Far Far Away

Far far away
Beyond the plains
Beyond where you and I can see
In the heights of the mountains
Lies a little place
Where once maybe
A god used to reside
But I do not know for sure 
And over there 
Is a shrine 
It does not have any idol 
No one comes to pray 
But it is spiritual 
And godly 
In it's own sense
Underneath the shrine 
There lies an earthen pot
With a scroll inside
Which has text 
in an ancient language 
And smells like cinnamon and flowers
The old scroll
Now dusty and dirty
Is still very valuable 
It contains 
The secret to happiness 
And maybe one day
When you and I master the language
Of the early men and women
We will be as happy
And as contented
As Adam and Eve were
When they first came here

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Date: 1/27/2020 7:53:00 AM
You write so well.
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/28/2020 12:34:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 1/25/2020 7:26:00 AM
WOW! Your talent shines in this poem, Aditi--saw you on the winner's list for JUMP.
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Aditi Upadhyaya
Date: 1/26/2020 5:43:00 AM
thankyou so much!
Date: 1/20/2020 2:41:00 AM
I think it is not far far away.. Our mind-mirrors reflects it to distant lands.. In fact it is so near, but far to reach.. Unless the right vessel for sail..
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Date: 1/26/2020 5:43:00 AM
that's an interesting take on it
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