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Far Away Dawns

Let us move towards the center of our dreams Let us dance beneath rainbow dawns We don't always understand what is going on around us but life is always suprising us and soon we will dance beneath starry stars once more

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Hana Ryusaka

Date: 3/11/2009 3:56:00 PM

I really like this poem's images... they're gorgeous. I also love how you actually pulled off a description like "starry stars" instead of sounding redundant, it adds to the effect of the poem. Great job!

Belinda Parish

Date: 3/2/2009 8:47:00 AM

Absolutely! Let us move towards the center of our dreams....Love it Matthew

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/6/2009 8:31:00 PM

This is a beautiful, uplifting piece. I love the way it feels. The imagery is wonderful. "Dancing beneath rainbow dawns" is very appealing. Great write! thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love, Robin

Adell Foster

Date: 12/26/2008 4:32:00 PM

Happy Holidays Mathew, this is a very lovely write, I love the smooth flowing imagery of the read. Thank you for sharing it and for your welcomed comments on my poetry... In answer to your question on "Cornfield's Have Ears", I was raised in the city for the most part but would visit my grandparents in the country most summer's. :-) Thanks Again for sharing your lovely poetry . Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/23/2008 3:29:00 AM

Beautiful Matthew. :) It was nice seeing you in Soul Fountain this issue, always nice to see a familiar face. Love, Kristin