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Far Away Dawns

Let us move towards
      the center of
our dreams
   Let us dance beneath 
rainbow dawns
   We  don't always understand 
what is going on
     around us 
but life is always suprising us 
   and soon we will dance
beneath starry stars
once more

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Hana Ryusaka

March 11, 2009 at 3:56 PM

I really like this poem's images... they're gorgeous. I also love how you actually pulled off a description like "starry stars" instead of sounding redundant, it adds to the effect of the poem. Great job!

Belinda Parish

March 2, 2009 at 8:47 AM

Absolutely! Let us move towards the center of our dreams....Love it Matthew

Robin L. Gass

January 6, 2009 at 8:31 PM

This is a beautiful, uplifting piece. I love the way it feels. The imagery is wonderful. "Dancing beneath rainbow dawns" is very appealing. Great write! thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love, Robin

Adell Foster

December 26, 2008 at 4:32 PM

Happy Holidays Mathew, this is a very lovely write, I love the smooth flowing imagery of the read. Thank you for sharing it and for your welcomed comments on my poetry... In answer to your question on "Cornfield's Have Ears", I was raised in the city for the most part but would visit my grandparents in the country most summer's. :-) Thanks Again for sharing your lovely poetry . Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Kristin Reynolds

December 23, 2008 at 3:29 AM

Beautiful Matthew. :) It was nice seeing you in Soul Fountain this issue, always nice to see a familiar face. Love, Kristin

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