Fantasy's Delight

Mirage of sun beams, In fantasy's eye awakes, Pleasures beyond time. Note: For Raul's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Haick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Wonderful Haiku, Jimmy! Good job! Peace and love, Audrey
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Beautiful haiku, Jimmy.
Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 12:41 PM
Wonderful Haiku Jimmy, all the best in Raul's contest >> James
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Jimmy. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 12:13 AM
Thanks for the support...Raul
Owens Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:53 PM
Beautiful Haiku Jimmy...Enjoyed reading tonight....Marty
Chircop Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:44 PM
So talented you are,,,beautiful ..indeed..Charma
Augustus Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Really like this. I actually can't pick a line this time. I like how each image is described.
Freeman Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:40 AM
A masterful Haiku in vividness of expressive form. Sincerely, Moses
Sheart Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 10:24 AM
Wow! Great Haiku my friend! Hope your'e entering it in Raul's contest. Just beautiful! Sending good thoughts your way. Thanks so much for sharing. smile....Love Light Patty Great job!
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