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Fantasy's Delight

Mirage of sun beams, In fantasy's eye awakes, Pleasures beyond time. Note: For Raul's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/25/2009 4:37:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku, Jimmy! Good job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/25/2009 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful haiku, Jimmy.
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:41:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Jimmy, all the best in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 11/19/2009 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Jimmy. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2009 12:13:00 AM
Thanks for the support...Raul
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:53:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku Jimmy...Enjoyed reading tonight....Marty
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:44:00 PM
So talented you are,,,beautiful ..indeed..Charma
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Date: 11/18/2009 1:12:00 PM
Really like this. I actually can't pick a line this time. I like how each image is described.
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:40:00 AM
A masterful Haiku in vividness of expressive form. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:24:00 AM
Wow! Great Haiku my friend! Hope your'e entering it in Raul's contest. Just beautiful! Sending good thoughts your way. Thanks so much for sharing. smile....Love Light Patty Great job!
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