Fantasy Trip

When without umbrella 
it poured mind wandered

how if it rained horizontally
it would rain as a blanket above 
and not stagnate to breed bacteria 
no spoiling of leather shoes 
 
cow dung on road is waste
but in farm is manure
rain on road is not of much use
in lake in farm its lifeline 

                >^<

When without flight tickets
grounded at airport mind on fancy flight

how if airports took off
pick right corner as did in 'bombing' game 
corner would accomodate more than plane
in emergency one would reach in time

conveyor belts on airport is of less utility
imagine conveyor belts in orbit 
and lift to reach orbit 
one would reach seeing angels on way

                  >^<

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By Hitendra Mehta
April 2011

For Members contest - Stream of Conciousness by Debbie Guzzi  
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 10:34 PM
Hey, you WON I just saw at the contest board. Way to go!!!
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April 30, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Yes, it is very stream of consciousness, Hitendra. YOu have quite an imagination in this one!
Brown Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your big win Hitendra in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your amazing placement in Debbie's contest with this grandiose entry my friend.. hope all is well with u ... enjoy your masterful win for a tremendous write luv..
Devonshire Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Dear Hitendra, I'm so happy to see your poem ranking high in this contest!!! Congratulations on a superb poem! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Hitendra
Mannan Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 6:20 AM
many warm congrats for this win.
Onclaud Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 1:42 AM
what a throbbing flight with matching sublime thoughts, hitendra.. big cheers for the shining win! :) hugggs
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Wonderful job, Hitendra.....well deserved win in Debbie's contest this is!! :)
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