Fantasy Fish In a Fantasy Ocean

Myths and legends have held the hearts spell bound for years
Mermaids, mythical animals, phoenix's have kept us enraptured in childhood
One of granny's tales was of an ocean high above the Himalayas
Hanging in mid air like a globe ruled by a magician king and his doting wife
Sequinned scaly scalloping flagships in myriad colours float in water without being wet
They could switch their coloured costumes and genders at random
Their comic foolery held me in much delight
Loving each other and holding flaps they swam in circles
Singing sweetest songs quivered only to good children and gods
They could open their flaps to swallow in fruit 
And shut like an umbrella to chew their juicy delight
They could rock and roll into a wrap and twist and shake in feverish madness
When sad and I shed a tear I was frightfully warned
That the tear would scallop to their beautiful rainbow kingdom 
To choke out the music of one mellifluous scintillating sequinned fish
My dreamscapes and reality have been filled with their enigmatic lives
Of the fantasy fish fishing in their fruity coral reef in a fantasy ocean

 
Balveen Cheema
November 12, 2015
Contest: Fantasy Fish In A Fantasy Ocean
Sponsor:Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 12/7/2015 8:25:00 AM
Your imagery takes me to the colored world of the ocean..... Congrats for your fantastic WIN Balveen! ;-)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 10:12:00 AM
How sweet Teddy! Thanks!
Date: 12/7/2015 12:18:00 AM
How lovely Balveen .. congrats on fine win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 12/6/2015 11:32:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 12/6/2015 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win!! -lu *smiles*
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 5:01:00 AM
Laura, can your couplets for 'Just one more day' be unrhymed or do you prefer it rhymed as a proper couplet (I've seen both) ?
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura!
Date: 12/6/2015 11:14:00 AM
Well done for being among my HMs, Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 4:44:00 AM
I'm so glad to receive the HM, Julia! I enjoyed this fantasy kingdom experience!
Date: 11/18/2015 10:54:00 PM
love the imagery in your poem good luck in the contest.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 4:48:00 AM
I'm so happy you love it! Thanks for your wishes!
Date: 11/12/2015 2:22:00 PM
Oooh this is a tantalising tale. Imagine an ocean over the Himalayas. The imagery is superb, and I assume it is a tale that has been passed down the generations orally? Folklore like that are just magical which adds to the story. Great write.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/13/2015 1:55:00 PM
Hi Mark! Welcome to my magical kingdom! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks or your kind visit!
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