Fantasy Fish In a Fantasy Ocean

Myths and legends have held the hearts spell bound for years
Mermaids, mythical animals, phoenix's have kept us enraptured in childhood
One of granny's tales was of an ocean high above the Himalayas
Hanging in mid air like a globe ruled by a magician king and his doting wife
Sequinned scaly scalloping flagships in myriad colours float in water without being wet
They could switch their coloured costumes and genders at random
Their comic foolery held me in much delight
Loving each other and holding flaps they swam in circles
Singing sweetest songs quivered only to good children and gods
They could open their flaps to swallow in fruit 
And shut like an umbrella to chew their juicy delight
They could rock and roll into a wrap and twist and shake in feverish madness
When sad and I shed a tear I was frightfully warned
That the tear would scallop to their beautiful rainbow kingdom 
To choke out the music of one mellifluous scintillating sequinned fish
My dreamscapes and reality have been filled with their enigmatic lives
Of the fantasy fish fishing in their fruity coral reef in a fantasy ocean

 
Balveen Cheema
November 12, 2015
Contest: Fantasy Fish In A Fantasy Ocean
Sponsor:Julia Ward
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Kimathi Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Your imagery takes me to the colored world of the ocean..... Congrats for your fantastic WIN Balveen! ;-)
Cheema Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 10:12 AM
How sweet Teddy! Thanks!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 12:18 AM
How lovely Balveen .. congrats on fine win!
Cheema Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:34 AM
Thanks Upma!
A  Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Balveen, congrats on your HM win. SKAT
Cheema Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:34 AM
Thanks Skat!
Scars Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win!! -lu *smiles*
Cheema Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 5:01 AM
Laura, can your couplets for 'Just one more day' be unrhymed or do you prefer it rhymed as a proper couplet (I've seen both) ?
Cheema Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:41 AM
Thank you so much Laura!
Ward Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Well done for being among my HMs, Balveen.
Cheema Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:44 AM
I'm so glad to receive the HM, Julia! I enjoyed this fantasy kingdom experience!
Roper Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 10:54 PM
love the imagery in your poem good luck in the contest.
Cheema Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 4:48 AM
I'm so happy you love it! Thanks for your wishes!
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November 12, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Oooh this is a tantalising tale. Imagine an ocean over the Himalayas. The imagery is superb, and I assume it is a tale that has been passed down the generations orally? Folklore like that are just magical which adds to the story. Great write.
Cheema Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Hi Mark! Welcome to my magical kingdom! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks or your kind visit!
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