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Fantasy

A gentle care bear drifts on a cotton sky, 
Where imagination fans its wings so high. 
In soft dream, he cruises past starry streams, 
Lost in sweet reverie, where wonder gleams. 

With playful whimsy, clouds become his throne, 
A castle where he laughs, all on his own. 
Through misty halls of hallucination, bright, 
His visualization , a magic in pale light. 

The bear floats on, heart open and free, 
A silent hug in that cloud-land fantasy— 
Where every child can drift and see, 
A world from words, alive in reverie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 9:25 PM
Such a sweet poem where the prompt words fit so well. If you had entered the contest, you would surely win.
Rose  Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 12:10 PM
lol My daughter used to adore care bears when she was growing up. I felt like you dipped me right into a fantasy of childhood and joy ! gl in the contest dearJay
Andresen Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 10:41 AM
- An entertainingly lovely poem, Jay :) - (if it's for the contest... you have to have 4 words in the title) - hugs
Narain Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. I don't enter in the contest these days.
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