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A gentle care bear drifts on a cotton sky, Where imagination fans its wings so high. In soft dream, he cruises past starry streams, Lost in sweet reverie, where wonder gleams. With playful whimsy, clouds become his throne, A castle where he laughs, all on his own. Through misty halls of hallucination, bright, His visualization , a magic in pale light. The bear floats on, heart open and free, A silent hug in that cloud-land fantasy— Where every child can drift and see, A world from words, alive in reverie.

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Date: 6/25/2025 9:25:00 PM
Such a sweet poem where the prompt words fit so well. If you had entered the contest, you would surely win.
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Date: 6/24/2025 12:10:00 PM
lol My daughter used to adore care bears when she was growing up. I felt like you dipped me right into a fantasy of childhood and joy ! gl in the contest dearJay
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Date: 6/24/2025 10:41:00 AM
- An entertainingly lovely poem, Jay :) - (if it's for the contest... you have to have 4 words in the title) - hugs
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Jay Narain
Date: 6/24/2025 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. I don't enter in the contest these days.

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