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Fantasy


free your mind from old chains,  
  fetch me all nine muses,
    focus on mages, dwarves,
      fairies, elves and pixies,
        find me magic potions,
          fabled tales surprises,
              fiction must reign supreme.
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Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 4:58 AM
I like your Pleiades using the letter F. Creative work. It is good to tell a few stories sometimes and enjoy them. Have you read my short story about Unkie. I appreciate you stopping by my page and taking time to comment on my work. Sara
Roper Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Perfect Pleiades, Victor, lovely imagery.
Jayasankar Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 12:25 AM
Lovely Pleiades dear Victor... Enjoyed reading... You reminded me now to write in this form... I love this form... God bless... ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Cute!
Y. Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 8:16 AM
WoW! Victor, You've such a magical and well-written Pleaide using the letter F. I enjoyed the read. Have a nice day my friend:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:51 PM
what a beautiful poem Victor I do enjoy the challenge of writing this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Proxenos Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:49 PM
I see you are joining my dragons and fairies, great poem Victor, love it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 12:30 PM
- Beautiful, Victor ... especially loves the first line ... nothing will happen without we free our mind from old chains :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Each line of this verse is another awesome step toward the beautiful world of fantasy, Victor. It was a pleasant excursion. :)
Edmonds  Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 8:41 AM
A fabulous Pleiades full of charm and fantasy Victor, wonderful… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Your verse takes us to the realms of fantasy, where we can escape the harshness of reality. Tom
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Victor, you've done an amazing job in this magical and lovely Pleiades. I like how your wonderful imagery and worlds flow.
Merryman Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Victor, this is a fantastic, magical pleiades! Love it! Blessings, Kim M
Pandit Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:00 AM
All the right ingredients you have, Victor, to evoke fantasy. Very well spun!
Skelly Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 5:24 AM
Love this, I feel as if I am in a magical realm....Delice
Rose  Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 3:15 AM
Ah, I love this, its one of my fav. can I use it, ? Vie
Daniel Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:13 AM
A lovely pleiades, Victor, I think it is listed as a form now on PS:) I love the flow of your fantasy world:)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Thank you, Jo. I was too busy this morning. Hugs.
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